Tuesday, 12 July 2011

storyboard

This is the beginning of my music video. I have firstly decided that a light will come on and a man will appear in glasses saying the first lyrics. Soon after it changes to a mid shot of myself walking with the attractive women whilst saying the lyrics. I would have various editing techniques such as still shots of the women to enhance they're beauty.

Within this storyboard, i have chosen that the shot I have created are of myself struggling to go up on stage performing with various subsidiary narrative sequences taking place whilst this happens.

Monday, 11 July 2011

shot list

sheet 1, frame 1
  • close up shot -suggest a direct address to audience
  • still shot
  • blackout effect
sheet 1, frame 2
  • close up shot   suggest a direct address to audience
  • zooms out to let the audience view the whole of the location
  • still shot
sheet 1, frame 3
  • mid shot let the audience gather a perspective on who the lead singer looks like
  • still shot
  • zoom out 
sheet 1, frame 4 
  • cutaway shot of women-to stress importance on them because of they're beauty
  • mid-shot- perspective on who the women look like
sheet 1 frame 5
  • dollying shot of main performer
  • various cutaways of dancers
sheet 1 frame 6
  • group shot of performer and women suggesting they're relationship
  • zoom out whilst they are all walking
  • shot shall be hand held enhance the pace
sheet 1 frame 7
  • low angle shot of women 
  • editing still effect to enhance her beauty
sheet 1 frame 8
  • low angle shot of angry man stress his importance and high status as he is muscular
  • still shot allow audience to focus on his apperance.

sheet 2 frame 1
  • panning shot of lead performer
  • hand held shot add tension
sheet 2 frame 2
  • mid shot to show a clear vieew of the singer
  • hand held to make audience feel like part of the audience in the concert
sheet 2 frame 3
  • audience point of view shot. would be hand held
  • mid to close up shot gives it a more direct address
sheet 2 frame 4
  • high angle shot on overweight man.indicate he doesn't have much importance,quite vulnerable
  • hand held,adds to tension
the other frames are still undecided yet i have gathered a rough outlook on what the ideas will be and consist of.

locations

Here are some of the locations i am thinking of shooting for my music video:
  • london
  • lincoln
  • fulnetby
  • market rasen
  • theatre royal in lincoln
  • uckfield

actors

myself-Eminem
thomas burley - gay man in bed
andre Scott-  drag-queen
kate fenwick- attractive looking woman
various extras which will be included in the video:

aaron scott
thomas burley
george cooper
megan deighton
various teachers ( still undecided)
matthew martin
joe lewis
angus mackay
leon charlton
kira martenez
others are still yet undicided

props

Here is the list of some of the props i am considering on using for my music video:
  • elvis presley costume
  • prisoner costume
  • sun glasses
  • fake cigarette
  • large sheet
  • bunny outfit
  • beer bottle
  • large fish
  • ice cream
  • microphone

Friday, 8 July 2011

lyrics

Here are the lyrics to my song:  without me

"Obie Trice, real name no gimmicks" - Obie Trice

[Intro]
Two trailer park girls go round the outside;
round the outside, round the outside
{*scratches*
Two trailer park girls go round the outside;
round the outside, round the outside
{*scratches*

Guess who's back
Back again
Shady's back
Tell a friend
Guess who's back, guess who's back, guess who's back, guess who's back
guess who's back, guess who's back, guess who's back.. {*Eminem hums*

[Verse One: Eminem]
I've created a monster, cause nobody wants to see Marshall no more
They want Shady, I'm chopped liver (huh?)
Well if you want Shady, this is what I'll give ya
A little bit of weed mixed with some hard liquor
Some vodka that'll jump start my heart quicker
than a shock when I get shocked at the hospital
by the doctor when I'm not co-operating
When I'm rockin the table while he's operating (hey!!)
You waited this long, now stop debating
Cause I'm back, I'm on the rag and ovu-lating
I know that you got a job Ms. Cheney
but your husband's heart problem's complicating
So the FCC won't let me be
or let me be me, so let me see
They try to shut me down on MTV
But it feels so empty, without me
So, come on and dip, bum on your lips
Fuck that, cum on your lips, and some on your tits
And get ready, cause this shit's about to get heavy
I just settled all my lawsuits, FUCK YOU DEBBIE!

[Chorus: Eminem]
Now this looks like a job for me
So everybody, just follow me
Cause we need a little, controversy
Cause it feels so empty, without me
I said this looks like a job for me
So everybody, just follow me
Cause we need a little, controversy
Cause it feels so empty, without me

[Verse Two: Eminem]
Little Hellions, kids feelin rebellious
Embarrassed their parents still listen to Elvis
They start feelin like prisoners helpless
'til someone comes along on a mission and yells BITCH!!!
A visionary, vision of scary
Could start a revolution, pollutin the airwaves
A rebel, so just let me revel and bask
in the fact that I got everyone kissin my ass {*smak*
And it's a disaster, such a catastrophe
for you to see so damn much of my ass; you asked for me?
Well I'm back, na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na
{*bzzt* Fix your bent antenna tune it in and then I'm gonna
enter in, endin up under your skin like a splinter
The center of attention, back for the winter
I'm interesting, the best thing since wrestling
Infesting in your kid's ears and nesting
{*bzzt* Testing, attention please
Feel the tension, soon as someone mentions me
Here's my ten cents, my two cents is free
A nuisance, who sent? You sent for me?

[Chorus]

[Verse Three: Eminem]
A-tisket a-tasket, I go tit for tat with
anybody who's talkin this shit, that shit
Chris Kirkpatrick, you can get your ass kicked
worse than them little Limp Bizkit bastards
And Moby? You can get stomped by Obie
You thirty-six year old baldheaded fag, blow me
You don't know me, you're too old, let go
It's over, nobody listen to techno
Now let's go, just gimme the signal
I'll be there with a whole list full of new insults
I been dope, suspenseful with a pencil
ever since Prince turned himself into a symbol {*knife slices*
But sometimes the shit just seems
everybody only wants to discuss me
So this must mean I'm dis-gus-ting
But it's just me, I'm just obscene
No I'm not the first king of controversy
I am the worst thing since Elvis Presley
to do black music so selfishly
and used it to get myself wealthy
(Hey!!) There's a concept that works
Twenty million other white rappers emerge
But no matter how many fish in the sea
It'll be so empty, without me

[Chorus]

{*Eminem sings this twice:
"Chem-hie-la-la-la, la-la-la-la-la
La-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la"*

[Eminem] Kids!

Friday, 1 July 2011

evaluation of target audience questionaire

question 1:

male:                   5
female:                3









question 2

15 - 17:              6
18 - 22:              0
23 - 30:              1
31 - 40:              0
40+:                   1



question 3

rock:                  4
alternative:          4
pop:                   3
rap:                    3
metal:                 0
country:              1
jazz:                   0
blues:                 1
other:                 5

question 4

ineffective
1:                      0
2:                      0
3:                      1
4:                      0
5:                      1
6:                      1
7:                      1
8:                      4
9:                      0
10:                    1
 effective

question 5
0 times:              0
1 - 3 times:        3
4 - 9 times:        2
10+ times:         3

question 6
  own opinion

question 7 

yes:                   7
no:                    1